Dark Horse is rated Mature! Although a part of the "magical girl" genre, Dark Horse has nudity, swearing, sexual situations, and violence, as well as adult themes and situations. Reader discretion is advised.
Busy textures. Motion lines clash with our dragon’s scales.
In addition, you may want to consider removing the still frame of Dragonfriend in their crouching state, as its position and pose don’t segue well into Dragonfriend’s leaping into flight on the rest of the page.
COMMENTARY:
I may be biased given that this is technically my third reading of Dark Horse, but Dragonfriend seems rather excited on this page for someone about to, ah, break bad news to our heroines. Not sure why they’d be so elated to make the announcement they eventually do.
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Busy textures. Motion lines clash with our dragon’s scales.
In addition, you may want to consider removing the still frame of Dragonfriend in their crouching state, as its position and pose don’t segue well into Dragonfriend’s leaping into flight on the rest of the page.
COMMENTARY:
I may be biased given that this is technically my third reading of Dark Horse, but Dragonfriend seems rather excited on this page for someone about to, ah, break bad news to our heroines. Not sure why they’d be so elated to make the announcement they eventually do.